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dedicatedfollower467 4th Jul 2016, 12:00 AM edit delete
dedicatedfollower467
So how's the "volume" on this page? Problem fixed, or do I need to get even bigger?

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kjc 4th Jul 2016, 11:32 AM edit delete reply
'Volume' excellent. Did Alfdis borrow a dress?
dedicatedfollower467 4th Jul 2016, 12:38 PM edit delete reply
dedicatedfollower467
Good to hear. And yep, she did. It was fun drawing her in a dress again, it's been like.... four chapters?
kjc 4th Jul 2016, 5:10 PM edit delete reply
Pretty much all the way to Ezden Kerr. I kind of liked her in'drag',though.
dedicatedfollower467 4th Jul 2016, 7:03 PM edit delete reply
dedicatedfollower467
I like both outfits a lot! (I did design them, after all...)
Haley 7th Jul 2016, 9:01 PM edit delete reply
I really like the angle you used in the top right, and how you placed the dialogue bubbles around it! It marks a significant shift in tone and makes it look like our characters are starting to focus on what they need to do
dedicatedfollower467 9th Jul 2016, 4:34 PM edit delete reply
dedicatedfollower467
Yay! I'm glad you like it!