Ch 5 Pg 7
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Ch 5 Pg 7

dedicatedfollower467 19th Sep 2014, 12:00 AM edit delete
well hey i bought sims 4.

that was, in many ways, a bad move.


Sleeper 19th Sep 2014, 12:51 AM edit delete reply
I really like the small cultural details you tuck away in your pages. Very nice work.
dedicatedfollower467 20th Sep 2014, 11:26 PM edit delete reply
Thanks! :) I do want the world to feel as "deep" as possible, and for dwarves, hair is one of those things.
kjc 22nd Sep 2014, 7:35 PM edit delete reply
I love those last three panels. I think, apart from the falling ribbon in the first(2nd?)chapter, that's my favorite visual sequence.
dedicatedfollower467 23rd Sep 2014, 9:17 AM edit delete reply
I'm glad you like it! It was an important moment for me, I'm glad the action comes across well.